Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Sun and moon

Authors Note: Here is my first time writing a Diamante. I tried to focus on word choice. 



        Sun
   Bright, Blistering 
Radiant, Burning, Glowing, Beaming
   Dulled, Glazing
       Moon
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3 comments:

  1. Ashton KNovember 8, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    The word choice in this poem is exceptional, and it's good to see you sticking to a form. However, centering the poem would make it appear more clean. Also, tell why you are writing this piece in the author's note.

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  2. AllieNovember 8, 2011 at 5:54 AM

    I like how you described the sun and the moon, But I have to agree with Ashton. The poem really needs centering.

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  3. MaiNovember 28, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    Nice word choice to describe the sun and the moon. I like your choice of opposites to do your poem on. Simple, but it gets the point. Great job!

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