Authors note: Here is another diamante, again working on word choice but this time also format. I would like to dedicate this essay to Mrs. Giese, because all through seventh grade when ever she would see students arguing she would always say"love over hate guys, love over hate" and while I was composing this it made me think of her.
This is a good diamante, but why did you choose the shoes for a picture? You should add that in your author's note.
ReplyDeleteI like this, I really like the structure of the diamante. I agree with Ashton though, the reasoning behind the shoes could have been added in the author's note. Otherwise, good job!
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job with this format of writing. The diamante is an enjoyable, concrete closed form. Well done.
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